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Poetry

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JMCKUSICK

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1. Thank you Godot51.
Thu Jul 10, 2025, 10:06 PM
Jul 10

It flows wonderfully and to its logical conclusion.
It really is multiple poems in one, many ways it can be read because you haven't led.
The lack of punctuation makes it a playground.
Masterfully done.

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the last of life [View all] Godot51 Jul 10 OP
Thank you Godot51. JMCKUSICK Jul 10 #1
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