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In reply to the discussion: Sharing a Story: Life is Not Fair [View all]

qwlauren35

(6,306 posts)
2. You got it.
Fri Aug 29, 2025, 11:46 AM
Aug 29

"Tell mom what you want. Mom might not be able to afford the gift, but she would tell dad, and when dad came, he would have it."

Thank you for letting me know that it moved you.

This was a piece written when I'm in my manic phase (I am bipolar) and for some reason, those pieces tend to be powerful.

Writing when I'm not in my manic phase does not have heart, and my meds prevent me from going full-on manic, so I stopped trying to push it. It hurts that I can't write, but it's better than writing crap.

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This beautifully written story broke my heart... Trueblue Texan Aug 29 #1
You got it. qwlauren35 Aug 29 #2
I actually think there is a lot of value in writing crap. Trueblue Texan Aug 29 #3
Hmmm... qwlauren35 Aug 29 #4
You did a good job with the main character's range of emotions, CrispyQ Sunday #5
OK qwlauren35 Monday #6
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